ASK: @SnafuSevSix: Agreed. Grading it strictly pass/fail, I'd say you accomplished what you set out to do. Though as a bit of constructive criticism, I would suggest that, in your future endeavors, you make some of your scenes a bit longer. I mean, the blowjob clip was literally two seconds long, which really didn't even make it worth putting in. I mean, you at least want to give your audience a chance to get a rise out of it. Just sayin'.
Also, a cumshot wouldn't go amiss with an animation like this. I mean, I get why you didn't. Based on what I've seen of your previous animations, you've never done one before, so you didn't feel comfortable trying it yet. I completely understand that. I'm just saying, that's something you're eventually gonna want to tackle, going forward.
But again, on balance, this was very good, for a first attempt. ^_^
SnafuSevSix: @ASK: tbh the blowjob was suposed to be longer but sfm corrupt the save and i didn't have the faith to start that scene all over again haha. Thanks a lot for you constructive critiscism bro!
@Nathan63134:
Go ahead, nothing is stopping you from creating stuff.
ASK: @SnafuSevSix: Ah, I see what happened. Well, either way, again, not bad for a first attempt. Hopefully, your future projects continue an upward trajectory. ^_^
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Also, a cumshot wouldn't go amiss with an animation like this. I mean, I get why you didn't. Based on what I've seen of your previous animations, you've never done one before, so you didn't feel comfortable trying it yet. I completely understand that. I'm just saying, that's something you're eventually gonna want to tackle, going forward.
But again, on balance, this was very good, for a first attempt. ^_^
@Nathan63134:
Go ahead, nothing is stopping you from creating stuff.
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