Lenaid: I donno it's something /¤.¤\

owar24: YEAH FAN SERVICE

dud3br0: Great animation....no, not really.

Lenaid: No I know but it worth a shot :P

mehgusta: @Lenaid: first try? because then it's amazing. maybe make the loop longer or somehow decrease the spanking

Lenaid: @mehgusta: Yeah kinda, I have done very little animating, so I am noob.
Thanks good criticism :)

Colson_14: This is pretty good. The positioning is awesome,. just need to work on animation smoothness

UnderCoverFap: @Lenaid Hey something is better than nothing!

Plus you are just starting animation, so people can't set the bar high. I'd recommend slowing down the movement a bit and maybe add movement with Max's facial expression so it doesn't come off so stiff.

Keep at it, your animations will be great! c:

*lewdrecommendations*

ThatgirlColdbluu91: you must train harder lol

speedlot: Yeah lenaid your posing is really good even if the animation isn't great. I'm sure with more work and practice you could get some really good stuff done.

Lenaid: Thanks guys, I'll do a second draft

Artyom: i'll add too Warren having his boner out, like he's allowed to watch but not touch himself

afrocrumble: @Lenaid: Hey Lenaid; I just want to say to keep at it! I tried SFM...well actually I never did...but still it's hard to make something good on the first go :)

Take every criticism in good faith. Here's a few things that you might need if you ever want to improve:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uDqjIdI4bF4
12 Principles that every single artist from SelfDrillingSMS to Donkboy have mastered:

Lenaid: @Artyom: Added :)

@afrocrumble: Thanks! The video is really helpful :)